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來源:小編 編輯:小編 日期:2022-10-30 21:00:15

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這樣的做法是錯誤的!

開頭結(jié)尾都不能忽視

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首先,讓我們來看看下面兩篇作文

①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

這兩篇文章的區(qū)別主要體現(xiàn)在最后

①結(jié)尾更加親切,豐富了文章內(nèi)容

②它給人一種作文草率的感覺

這會影響老師對這篇作文的印象和感受!因此,在信件作文中,我們最好在最后添加可以改進和總結(jié)的問候和句子,以使作文內(nèi)容更加豐富多彩。

王老師建議先自己訓(xùn)練,再參考范文!

訓(xùn)練 參照范文

Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

Talk to you soon,

Mary

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