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來(lái)源:小編 編輯:小編 日期:2023-01-30 14:10:38

好的開(kāi)始是好作文的一半。

好的結(jié)局也是好作文的前提條件

結(jié)尾寫(xiě)得好

不僅可以起到總結(jié)全文的作用

更能起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛、提分的作用。

有的同學(xué)在寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候很容易在結(jié)尾草草做事。

這種做法是錯(cuò)誤的!

開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾都不能疏忽

下一步就和王老師一起來(lái)看看今天的內(nèi)容吧?

先來(lái)看看這兩篇作文。

①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

這兩篇文章的區(qū)別主要表現(xiàn)在最后。

①結(jié)局更加親切,文章內(nèi)容也更加豐富。

②給人一種作文草草的感覺(jué)。

會(huì)影響老師對(duì)這篇作文的印象和感受!所以在信件作文中,最好在最后加上問(wèn)候和可以改進(jìn)和總結(jié)的句子,這樣作文內(nèi)容才能更飽滿(mǎn),更有色彩。

推薦先自己訓(xùn)練一下再參考范文哦!

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Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

Talk to you soon,

Mary

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